Noooooot sure the speechbubble in the middle is right, really. @.@
Any suggestions or criticism? (or is it even right like that? XD)
Mmm... the speech bubble in the middle is confusing. Speech bubbles without tails are usually for people out of the panel speaking, but his mouth is open, so it looks like he's talking. If he's talking, it needs a tail, maybe?
Mmmm ... I don't know about the bubble, I suppose it's Noèl's speaking from the context.
But what I am sure is Noèl looking a bit naughty in the top right panel. Like a little demon trying to look like an innocuous angel "No, I didn't do anything. Why ?" :3 I hope we will have some naughty bits about him (and very very naughty ones X3).
It looks right to me :D
Oh, it wasn't about wether it was understandable who is talking, but about the content, because it's an idiom and as I'm not a native speaker I wasn't sure if it was right. ^^
@Soen Kai: the idiom sounds correct to me. I'm from west cost US if that is important to determine if it is XD
If you wanted a different version you could always use:
You know Kae is out of grace with Kakyu
But I think the one you chose is best.
^w^ Thanks! I'll stop worrying then. *ehe*
@Soen Kai: As a non native english speaker, I quite understood it. (Well, google translator give me a more precise meaning that just guessing it from the context and it matched perfectly the situation).