RUN WITH THE LEGS YOUR MOMA GAVE YOU!!!! GO MEN GO!!!!
OMG! A chase scene! YES!!! XD
RUN LIKE THE WIND!!!
Dez looked so shocked when Kae grabbed him!
But anyways, run they are chasing you guys!!!
An awesome chase scene~
(smiles loving at update)
Can't wait for the what will happen next page xD (Very curious..)
You are amazing as always :)
Okay cue the music. Aaaanddd... Cut to dramatic close up.
chase scene! CHASE SCENE! *epic fast paced music plays*
Okay, I'd like to offer some critique for this page concerning the transitions from panel to panel, and particularly panel 5.
So, Kae is standing on Dez's left side and grabs Dez's hand with his right hand. In panel 5, however, he has switched hands from right to left which, assuming that they are indeed running, would force him to run in an awkward position in front of Dez rather than side by side. This really hurts the flow in my opinion, especially as it's supposed to be such a fast paced, thrilling scene.
Everything, aside from that one panel though, I love.. :)
Here they come!~
Kae..I think after this incident would be the time to explain some things, ne?
Oh and Inori's face in the second panel is unbelievably charming. Your work is, as always, completely captivating and beyond beautiful. I can't wait for the next update!
Just like old times~
Just don't jump off a cliff this time guys....
I LOVE Kae's face in the center panel!
Aww just when things were going well between them.
Fourth panel: "Run." *Shit just got real*
Awwww, Inori's confused face is so adorable!!
I wonder if his instincts will kick in as well during this chase ^^
Run Forest! Runn!!! hahaa
Ah shi- °_°;; you're right!
X'D I didn't.... I really totally didn't see that myself when I was drawing. Now that you mention it their hands have to be the other way around. Otherwise Kae would have had to let go of Dez' hand to grab it again the other way around.
%D omg... I'm so stupid somtimes.
Thank you for pointing that out. I'll redraw that panel. (((( >°,°>)
I cannot get over the beauty of this art. Every time there's a new page I'm somehow unprepared for how gorgeous it looks.
"Run." ---Me: *-* --bathump--
Inori's expression is amazing as always.
Kae looks so good when he's serious! I love how he's leading right now, but I bet Dez was definitely the protector before he lost his memory. ;) Nice reversal here.
i thought he was being cute
BEST STORY EVER!!
ooo the suspense! o^o
My immediate response:
"Oh fuck. D:"
Cannot wait to see where this goes!!
They're holding hands! *dies of happiness* and a chase scene...shit just got real