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posted September 25th, 2012, 6:45 pm


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September 25th, 2012, 6:48 pm

Kenn (Guest)

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RAWR RUUNNN~~~

*chase scene*

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September 25th, 2012, 6:49 pm

ShinkuNoAme

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*delighted face*

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September 25th, 2012, 7:13 pm

demon69

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RUN WITH THE LEGS YOUR MOMA GAVE YOU!!!! GO MEN GO!!!!

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September 25th, 2012, 7:26 pm

Andromeda Lazuli

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OMG! A chase scene! YES!!! XD

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September 25th, 2012, 7:40 pm

hushsee

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RUN LIKE THE WIND!!!

Dez looked so shocked when Kae grabbed him!

But anyways, run they are chasing you guys!!!

RUN!

An awesome chase scene~

(smiles loving at update)

Can't wait for the what will happen next page xD (Very curious..)

You are amazing as always :)

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September 25th, 2012, 8:11 pm

FlyingPencil

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Okay cue the music. Aaaanddd... Cut to dramatic close up.

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September 25th, 2012, 8:19 pm

kuroi_hitsuji

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chase scene! CHASE SCENE! *epic fast paced music plays*

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September 25th, 2012, 8:21 pm

streetwalker

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Okay, I'd like to offer some critique for this page concerning the transitions from panel to panel, and particularly panel 5.

So, Kae is standing on Dez's left side and grabs Dez's hand with his right hand. In panel 5, however, he has switched hands from right to left which, assuming that they are indeed running, would force him to run in an awkward position in front of Dez rather than side by side. This really hurts the flow in my opinion, especially as it's supposed to be such a fast paced, thrilling scene.

Everything, aside from that one panel though, I love.. :)

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September 25th, 2012, 9:20 pm

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Uwah.. >.<
Here they come!~

Kae..I think after this incident would be the time to explain some things, ne?

Oh and Inori's face in the second panel is unbelievably charming. Your work is, as always, completely captivating and beyond beautiful. I can't wait for the next update!

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September 25th, 2012, 9:39 pm

chikao

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Just like old times~
Just don't jump off a cliff this time guys....

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September 25th, 2012, 10:25 pm

Child of the Night

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I LOVE Kae's face in the center panel!

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September 25th, 2012, 10:27 pm

coloradogirl86

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Aww just when things were going well between them.

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September 26th, 2012, 12:19 am

XxiEmoLysaxX

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Fourth panel: "Run." *Shit just got real*

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September 26th, 2012, 2:45 am

Hii-chan

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Awwww, Inori's confused face is so adorable!!
I wonder if his instincts will kick in as well during this chase ^^

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September 26th, 2012, 4:12 am

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Run Forest! Runn!!! hahaa

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September 26th, 2012, 4:57 am

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@streetwalker
Ah shi- °_°;; you're right!
X'D I didn't.... I really totally didn't see that myself when I was drawing. Now that you mention it their hands have to be the other way around. Otherwise Kae would have had to let go of Dez' hand to grab it again the other way around.
%D omg... I'm so stupid somtimes.
Thank you for pointing that out. I'll redraw that panel. (((( >°,°>)

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September 26th, 2012, 6:25 am

crave (Guest)

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I cannot get over the beauty of this art. Every time there's a new page I'm somehow unprepared for how gorgeous it looks.

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September 26th, 2012, 6:59 am

Pedes

:D

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:3

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September 26th, 2012, 6:11 pm

k_chichan

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"Run." ---Me: *-* --bathump--
Inori's expression is amazing as always.

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September 26th, 2012, 11:44 pm

WishingGirl

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Kae looks so good when he's serious! I love how he's leading right now, but I bet Dez was definitely the protector before he lost his memory. ;) Nice reversal here.

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September 27th, 2012, 9:08 pm

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aw
:(
i thought he was being cute
sob

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September 28th, 2012, 4:43 pm

penny6

AWESOME

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BEST STORY EVER!!

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September 29th, 2012, 1:29 am

FallenNight

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ooo the suspense! o^o

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September 29th, 2012, 3:37 am

haneganai

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My immediate response:
"Oh fuck. D:"

Cannot wait to see where this goes!!

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October 3rd, 2012, 6:34 pm

JayRayne

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They're holding hands! *dies of happiness* and a chase scene...shit just got real

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