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posted August 8th, 2011, 5:21 pm


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August 8th, 2011, 5:23 pm

X a k i

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He almost touched him. oxo

This is sort of a cliffhanger, wondering what shall follow.

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August 8th, 2011, 5:24 pm

lit-emo-rose

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O wow wonder where this is gonna go

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August 8th, 2011, 5:28 pm

Bunnygirl >:3 (Guest)

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I love it but poor Kae he just wanted too touch Dez QmQ but! I LOVE how this is going!so interesting xD yay!:3

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August 8th, 2011, 5:35 pm

AlkseeyaKC

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Go on. Touch it! We know you want to! XD

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August 8th, 2011, 5:37 pm

wolf-gb94

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that abdomen is yummy OwO

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view fishmasmouse's profile

August 8th, 2011, 5:38 pm

fishmasmouse

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I love the sparkle in the last panel~

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view dragonfairy's profile

August 8th, 2011, 5:46 pm

dragonfairy

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oh yes! Yes! Yes! Yes!

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August 8th, 2011, 6:16 pm

strictlyacademic

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CONTINUE! D: STOP BEING SHY.

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August 8th, 2011, 6:17 pm

PetiteMizu

TuT+

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I can see Dez staring at Kae's ass >w> ehehehehehe...

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August 8th, 2011, 6:20 pm

Butterroll

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nah. they're just gonna have a tickle fight. >u<

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view Raisarose's profile

August 8th, 2011, 6:23 pm

Raisarose

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Wow, Kae... Just wow.

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view sunlily's profile

August 8th, 2011, 6:24 pm

sunlily

Lawd Have Mercy!

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OH honey, you were so close. Take the lead Dez! Show him where that happy trail leads!

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August 8th, 2011, 6:52 pm

Sora Love

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Oh~ Damn I really love Kae, he's so adorable! I feel sorry for him D: Having Dez so close but not being able to even give him a hug is so sad :'(

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August 8th, 2011, 7:04 pm

orenjibeat

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freakin conscience...

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August 8th, 2011, 7:14 pm

Stephi

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Just me or is he staring at his ass in the last panel?

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August 8th, 2011, 7:17 pm

Sammy7XD

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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! >:I damn it! so close!

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view mangofurutani's profile

August 8th, 2011, 7:30 pm

mangofurutani

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OH MY GOD JUST BANG ALREADY.

Such a beautiful paaaage.

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August 8th, 2011, 7:46 pm

lllll (Guest)

OH I CAN GUESS

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OH I CAN GUESS WHERE THIS IS GOING~! :D
*what im imagining will happen*
turns out they were dating in the past, but like -full on- lovers. blindie was part of a super secret -blah blah- with all his glorious kick-ass moves. But due to being part of -blah blah- his beloved boyfriend god in danger~ and so, while trying to rescue him this thing happened and now he's like this. But his- OHMIGAWD I JUST REALIZED! then why would he keep it a secret from him... :( damn and i thought i was on a roll.

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August 8th, 2011, 9:52 pm

Sychaar

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LOL I WANT TO TOUCH HIS ABS TOO. xD

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view tangyskittles's profile

August 8th, 2011, 10:36 pm

tangyskittles

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...
YOUR SEXY IS TOO MUCH! ITS TOO TEMPTING! COVER YOUR BODY >:T

Of course I don't want you too but STILL. STOP MOCKING US! -sob-

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August 8th, 2011, 10:37 pm

xNillx

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Aw Kae..It must be really hard for him to suppress his feelings and memories..His blushing face is so gorgeous and I also love the way you drew Inori's confused reaction..It's so interesting seeing their roles reversed..Kae pushing away his feelings for Inori's sake..It was so the opposite before..Maybe the old Inori will resurface and he'll make the next move ^_^ As always, you did a brilliant job..I can't wait for the next page!

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view C4reless's profile

August 8th, 2011, 11:00 pm

C4reless

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Kae is so cute.

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view mushroomtale's profile

August 8th, 2011, 11:00 pm

mushroomtale

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OMG, awkward! If I were him I wouldn't be able to hold back, and why would I want to? ; )

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view bunnystar's profile

August 9th, 2011, 2:47 am

bunnystar

Dear author

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Dear Beloved Author,
I am a loyal fan. You know what we all want. Now please cater to us and throw us a bone. Thank you.

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view reapervampire's profile

August 9th, 2011, 3:46 am

reapervampire

Addiction

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I seriously love this. It makes me so happy when I see an update. I need this.

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view kuroi_hitsuji's profile

August 9th, 2011, 6:54 am

kuroi_hitsuji

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*ruffles hair* his hair looks so soft...LOL SORRY...
I just noticed so I was.. >_<

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view I'M-A-TURTLE!'s profile

August 9th, 2011, 12:00 pm

I'M-A-TURTLE!

GRR..

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I'm never hear in time to ever comment on a page without everyone already saying what I feel about it! You know screw it! This is the BEST COMIC EVER! And I love all of your pages and how you draw them. It's just really really cute and sexy! Great now I have to go find my chi again. Hope to catch next update in time.

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August 9th, 2011, 3:17 pm

iMusicalMinji

PFF

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For a minute there, I thought he was trying to tickle him. But aside from that, this comic is wonderful. (Don't be shy, touch it >:) )

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view Cheshi's profile

August 9th, 2011, 7:13 pm

Cheshi

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This made my day yesterday and again today, and it will tomorrow, too.

I LOVE this comic!

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view bookaddict209's profile

August 10th, 2011, 11:25 am

bookaddict209

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damn
come on, touch them!

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August 10th, 2011, 12:41 pm

In (Guest)

Oh my Gawd~~~

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Oooooooh TAT
I feel alive again! I was craving for this... w(*o*)w So many news pages! I'm glad! **Didn't have internet during a while a freaking long while and was on tokimeki 1 and 2nd on Ds to pass time**
Well I don't have much time, but I liked theses pages, at the point that it was to much for my poor heart X) It was ridiculously touching **or maybe it's the emotion of the reunion with TEN ROFL** T_T And for the last page... It was just like = Hum look yummy... Should I recheck it? No I shouldn't! Do not eat is wrote all over! XD **Go to hide somewhere again** No no Kae you can look but no touching is allowed for the time being!

I totally get your point of view since mine isn't so far from this... But my sadist side isn't just for characters ^_^ No wait! Don't run away! <(ToT<) Maybe it's cause of your sadist side that I have my little portion kufufu... Jocking! **Crap I bretrayed me... I laughed again when reading p49, exactly this one -_-**
In my greatness I forgive you... LOL =p I'm glad you liked the songs (but no worry it wasn't for ten, just for you ! XD) well I didn't check the promise but I'll do it soon or later **When the net will come back maybe >_<**
PS: Ewww... I didn't have much time but it's quite long! I can't say for sure "At the next page" but keep the good job! I'm cheering for you! Keep the SupaStory and the supArt ^_- See ya~~~~
PS2: You're right... They can be more harmonious... They're some magic atmosphere on this page. oO

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view megami23's profile

August 10th, 2011, 1:26 pm

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sfdajflksafjK SO CLOSE, AND YET--
I really like the tones and the highlights in their hair on this page <3
And I know he's twisting his body, but there's something about Dez's torso/muscles in the last panel seem a little off to me. Ah, but I might be wrong, so feel free to ignore it~
On another note, I really like the way you shade folds in clothes ;u;

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view Manga-Ka's profile

August 12th, 2011, 3:00 am

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This is a really interesting comic, I'm guessing that they're both from same place because of the bar-code's that both of them have on the right shoulder/arm.

If that's so I guess the light haired guy doesn't have any identity ether and that's why he's a hobo..?

Perhaps they can help each other out?
Kae can help him with the memories?
And Dez helps him with the food and place to stay??

Gotta say you're really good at human anatomy and surroundings to, I think it's a rather clean comic, (the line arts) which I really enjoy, I'm looking forward for more of this comic, great job!

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view Naruhina2124's profile

September 29th, 2011, 7:11 pm

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Aww poor Kae :(

He is so close to the one he loves most yet so far....

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view Innocent.Mask's profile

January 16th, 2012, 4:04 am

Innocent.Mask

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I love this! Its perfect!

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view TaliciaEm's profile

November 12th, 2013, 6:28 am

TaliciaEm

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It's okay, hun. I'd find the urge to not grope him near impossible too. xD

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April 29th, 2014, 6:31 pm

roxannebeloved

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Listening to Ellie Goulding - Anything could happen whilst reading this...
So fitting >:#D

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August 11th, 2015, 10:56 am

Dave_Strudel

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TOUCH ET

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