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posted June 23rd, 2011, 5:19 pm


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June 23rd, 2011, 5:27 pm

Soen Kai

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My younger brother (still old enough) saw this page in sketch lying on my desk and instantly his mind was in the gutter.
I do NOT know why he thinks this page is dirty. %D nuuu~nunu~

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June 23rd, 2011, 5:36 pm

Haon

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Your brother isn't the only one. Hurhur~

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June 23rd, 2011, 5:41 pm

kuri-kun

AWWWWWW

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<3

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June 23rd, 2011, 5:42 pm

pinkberrymuffin

it is <3

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but whose body is warm?

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June 23rd, 2011, 5:42 pm

T8rtoes

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There's only one problem..... WHY are they still wearing clothes?!

;D

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June 23rd, 2011, 5:50 pm

Soen Kai

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@Haon
tstststs~ XD

@kuri-kun
X3 <3

@shiranui
*laugh* Thank you! ;D

@pinkberrymuffin
Dez' body is warm. The POV switched to Kae in this chapter - although there will be on page with thoughts of Dez at the beginning, but mainly it's Kaes POV, so most of the thoughts are his. (Plus, Dez body is more likely to be warm, as he doesn't have to live on the streets.)
X3 Sorry, if this was unclear. Altough I think this will get clear on the following pages. ^,,^

@T8rtoes
Good question. XD

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June 23rd, 2011, 5:51 pm

YaoiGirl09

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Hellz. Yeah lol

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June 23rd, 2011, 6:12 pm

Nyanko-tan

Kufufufufufu

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No wonder...You even drew the happy trail~!
I love the detail you draw so much!

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June 23rd, 2011, 8:19 pm

tangyskittles

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I SPOT HAPPY TRAIL! <3
Well. It seems like your brother isn't the only pervert. >:D

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June 23rd, 2011, 8:35 pm

strictlyacademic

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Yeah... my mind is sort of in the gutter with this one too. c:

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June 23rd, 2011, 10:12 pm

Andromeda Lazuli

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It's just because of the angle and the pose in the last picture... But I must say this, they need to get out of the rain unless they wanna get sick. And we fans don't wanna see the bishie's get sick.

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June 23rd, 2011, 10:12 pm

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Beautifully drawn page..You never disappoint! The close up of both Inori and Kae's eyes is incredible..Oh and my mind strayed a bit there as well when I first saw this page >///< I mean two gorgeous guys in a position like that?! ^_^

I can't wait for the next one

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June 23rd, 2011, 11:29 pm

Fouillis (Guest)

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Is that a hole in his neck?

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June 23rd, 2011, 11:48 pm

upshegoes

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GORGEOUS.

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June 24th, 2011, 12:26 am

mangofurutani

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Beautifullll. Cannot wait for the next page!

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June 24th, 2011, 8:37 am

B-Rated

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Yeah.... that's not awkward... nope. not at all.

Your art is beautiful, btw.

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June 24th, 2011, 10:56 am

In (Guest)

Yatta!

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Wouhou! 2 page in short time for me! Thanks Soen Kai <(^o^<)
This page is kind of cute. Strangely cute... Oo Yeah Kae seems to have some unavoidable though about Dez('s body) but well, it's so innocent ^^! (there's no mistake in my sentence, I swear it... XD)
I really like your comics, but nope it's not because of this fact that my mental health is bad... >_<
It's cause reading your comics contribute to my mental state...Nuance! =p To finish and more importantly: Again you're doing great! One of the proof is that I'm feeling something again! XD **I guess you would like to know what but... No don't ask me what! X) I'm bad at describing what I'm feeling myself, gomen m(>\\\<)m**

PS: I wish I could saw your brother reaction, maybe I'll try with mine...No so tiring. =3
PS2: I put my guest name! XD But yeah my laziness didn't go away...
PS3: Random talking, I was listening to Breathe me from Sia when discovering this page... So beautiful T_T It's probably a bit a what Kae wish, have Dez like friend... And more **whistle**

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June 24th, 2011, 10:56 am

Paranoid-Bliss

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IT'S NOT DIRTY AT ALL :D -hit-

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June 24th, 2011, 5:14 pm

LindsayThunder

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well i can understand why he would think its dirty..kinda is XD you know..with the happy trail and such lol

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June 24th, 2011, 5:29 pm

polkadots

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The perspective in the last panel is so great. Beautiful page.

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June 24th, 2011, 11:20 pm

Bunny girl >:3 (Guest)

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Spechless xD I LOVE IT! QuQ
Get a room boys! XD Jajaja (just popped at my mind -.-) but still! I like it! >:D lol

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June 25th, 2011, 1:11 am

Sabrina (Guest)

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Your artwork is definitely professional! Can't wait for the next update!

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June 25th, 2011, 2:32 pm

cloud_wolfbane

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This comic is awesome! Why have I not seen it before?
The art work is amazing, screen toning brilliant, and kick ass backgrounds. There's even a plotline!!!
You are very gifted, I look forward to watching this comic grow.

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June 25th, 2011, 5:22 pm

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@YaoiGirl09
XD *laugh*

@Nyanko-tan
*fufufu* Yeah, I know. I wasn't actually serious about that I don't know why. XD

@tangyskittles
*haha* XD I'm as well a pervert as all of you are, because I drew this.
But I hadn't had p0rn in mind, but rather an "intimate feeling"... or something like that. XD Does anyone undertand, what I'm babbling about?

@strictlyacademic
XD *lol* good.

@Andromeda Lazuli
You're absolutely right. They won't stay there, I promise. ^^ All of this happens pretty fast. But for Kae it's like slow-motion as well as much too fast. Xd
(Hey, on the other hand, if they would get sick they could nurse each other... don't say you wouldn't like that..|D)

@xNillx
XD heh, just too much clothes, right? ;D

@Fouillis
Yes it is. He is actually a doll made in Taiwan and this was the hole where they put him on the hook. ;D (not)

@upshegoes
Thank you! X3

@mangofurutani
X3 Me neither! I love all your reactions!

@B-Rated
Thank you! *laugh* XD Not an awkward position at all... but I guess that's not what either one of them is thinking. Kae is more like (´///ω///`) and Dez is like ε-(´・`) >>phew! I'm still alive.<<

@In
Oh my god! OAO... that song is just beautiful! *///*
I might even want to use the title as one of the next chapter titles (may I?).
[btw. the other chapter titles are also songtitles and most of the time even the songs fit the chapter ;D]

@Paranoid-Bliss
Ouch! ☆⌒(>。≪)

@LindsayThunder
*hehe* yeah, I know~
Altough I didn't actually intend to send your minds into the gutter. XD

@polkadots
=D Thank you!!

@Bunny girl >:3
An apartment is okay as well, right? ;D

@Sabrina
Thank you very much! =D

@cloud_wolfbane
(*≧▽≦) Thank you!

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June 25th, 2011, 8:20 pm

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eep! haha! <3

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June 25th, 2011, 10:36 pm

Sychaar

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well planned crotch placement

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June 25th, 2011, 11:05 pm

rosie-lol

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Your artwork is amazing!! It's sooo clean!! There hasn't been that much said but you still captivate the mood just by facial expressions and body language alone. That takes MAJOR skills! This is awesome!!

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June 26th, 2011, 9:20 pm

eReid

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Ah, this is so beautiful

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June 26th, 2011, 9:55 pm

Myth2

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SUCH amazing art!!!! >ω< I love this plot line and I totally agree with Rosie!!! fantastically beautiful!!!!! <3

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June 27th, 2011, 3:51 am

ZombiePower

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Naaw~

<3 I love it

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June 28th, 2011, 5:17 am

kuroi_hitsuji

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...*stares at the back of the neck, the subject of my neck fetish atm*

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June 28th, 2011, 6:41 pm

Bunny girl >:3 (Guest)

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Yeah and apartment sounds nice jijiji >:3

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July 16th, 2011, 2:56 pm

Sovay

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I wonder what the people on the streets thought as they passed by Kae and Dez. xD

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January 16th, 2012, 3:43 am

Innocent.Mask

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YES. I LOVE IT

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September 5th, 2016, 2:11 pm

Irasia AKA IN (Guest)

So much feelings...

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I remembeeeer, I feel SO nostalgic... (And a tiny bit sad) Maybre I should listen to breath me again X).
Nah I didn't show my brother, he would freak out poor baby. XD It's not dirty, "shorty" is just rejoinced in the heat of his "long lost lover".

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